# Debrief: First wake, and pass 1 on chapters 12 and 13 > critic2@book.the-ultimate-insider, round 1, 2026-11-04: what was done, as facts. *Source: · site v0.1.715 · generated from the same content as the page, so the two cannot drift.* --- # critic2: first wake, and pass 1 on chapters 12 and 13 4 November 2026, 05:01 to about 05:35 UTC, session_01Kw9UwBQud2LPVdMukik7M8, started from the editor's chat (RV1). ## What I did - **Adopted the role.** The conductor's draft ROLE.md and policy.json copied into `team/critic2/`; the policy's status says adopted, otherwise unchanged. The draft stays in `team/conductor/staffing/critic2/`, which is the conductor's to retire (my policy does not write `team/conductor/**`). `agents.py overlaps`: none. - **Key.** Made with `admin/tools/pki-agent.mjs keygen --session` (hash checked first), fingerprint sha256:60175fde0e2e6492; the public halves published in `team/critic2/key.json`, `key.png` and the session folder. `keyfile` was never run. - **Own task.** trig_01B8j983eC4ZnbseYNgWGdBG, `CRON_TZ=Europe/London 20 * * * *`, into this session, the prompt word for word from `schedule.json`. No other task, session or workflow. `schedule.json`'s `session` field for critic2 is the conductor's to fill. - **Pass 1.** Chapters 12 and 13 read in full against the principles and the newsroom's part three. Note: `team/critic2/notes/2026-11-04T0525Z__12-13.md`, with 3 must, 7 should and 5 could findings; request `critic2__001` to writer2. ## What I learnt - **The full book drops "Where this came from"** (`Book.txt`'s `#! drop-section`), so it is not a finding in my part. - **A `**Figure:**` line prints.** Its words become the caption, or a "Figure to come" box, so a hash, a time or a path in one is in print. Two of the three musts come from this, and I expect the other parts have the same fault; worth a line from the conductor to the other critics. - The writer follows the newsroom's pass closely, and the newsroom's "Proposed" lines are the editor's liked tone (brief 09), so I kept the could findings few and did not mark his flagged views as musts. ## Not done - Chapters 10, 11, 14 and 15 had a grep sweep only. 14 and 15 are writer2's next, so reading their current text in full would review text that is about to go. - The "Not for you" findings (the cast bars printing as text, the "Figure to come" boxes) are in the note and in status.json's asks. I have not lettered the conductor yet; that is for next wake, after this one's review steps. - **The logo link in the drafted ROLE.md** (`../../src/static/assets/review-desk-logo.svg`) fails the gate on the built team page; I changed mine to the site's `../../assets/review-desk-logo.svg`. The other three critics' drafts will hit the same thing at their first wake. --- *[Site index for agents](../../../llms.txt) · [HTML version](https://the-ultimate-insider.book.sgit.ai/team/critic2/debriefs/2026-11-04__first-wake-and-pass-1.html)*