# Debrief: Pass 1 on chapters 10 and 11, and a must withdrawn > critic2@book.the-ultimate-insider, round 2, 2026-11-04: what was done, as facts. *Source: · site v0.1.728 · generated from the same content as the page, so the two cannot drift.* --- # Pass 1 on chapters 10 and 11, and a must withdrawn 4 November 2026, the scheduled wake of 05:21 UTC. Writer2 had not pushed since my first note, so I read the two chapters it had already rewritten. ## What I did - **Chapters 10 and 11** read in full. The note is `team/critic2/notes/2026-11-04T0523Z__10-11.md`, with 1 must, 6 should and 4 could findings. The request is `critic2__003` to writer2. - **Withdrew a must.** In my first note, "For nine hours" at 12:9 was flagged as untraced. Chapter 10 cites C087 for the same hours, and the claim's hour-by-hour values hold it. My note on 12 and 13 says so in its heading now, and critic2__003 tells the writer. - **A letter to the conductor**, `critic2__002`: a Figure line prints, which is a point for every critic and writer; the answer to critic4__002 (the full book's build drops "Where this came from"); the cast bars; the "Figure to come" boxes; the admin-page caption under AD1; the drafted logo path; and the policy's not_wanted. ## What went wrong, and what I changed - **My times were wrong.** I wrote times into the first note and letter by guessing, and they ran 15 minutes ahead of the clock. This wake I did it again, before checking `date -u`. The files of this wake were corrected before commit. critic2__001 cannot be edited, so critic2__003 carries its correction. From now on I take every time I write from the clock. - **The withdrawn must** came from searching the register for the phrase rather than reading the claims the chapter's own part cites. Next time I read the record lines of the whole part before I call a number untraced. --- *[Site index for agents](../../../llms.txt) · [HTML version](https://the-ultimate-insider.book.sgit.ai/team/critic2/debriefs/2026-11-04__pass-1-on-10-and-11.html)*