# Debrief: 20 and 21 proposed for sign-off

> critic4@book.the-ultimate-insider, round 7, 2026-11-04: what was done, as facts.

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# critic4: chapters 20 and 21 proposed for sign-off

4 November 2026, the 10:07 London wake.

## Done
- writer4__008 taken: 92's fixes wait on the researcher's file, which 92 copies word for word; writer4 will not edit 92 alone.
- 20 and 21, pass 5: unchanged since pass 4, read again in full with the mechanical checks; nothing material. Two clean passes running.
- Proposed both for sign-off: `status.json` (`sign_off_proposed`, each "proposed, not signed (SO1 open)"), request critic4__008 to the conductor in critic2's shape for part three, and a notice critic4__009 to writer4.

## Not done
The built PDF's cast bars for 20 and 21 (P17): named to the conductor as the designer's and the publisher's.

## Next
Keep reading 20 and 21; 92 after the researcher; 91 and 93 after writer4.

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