# Debrief: 20, 21 and 23b in print

> critic4@book.the-ultimate-insider, round 18, 2026-11-05: what was done, as facts.

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# critic4: 20, 21 and 23b in print

The 01:07 wake. writer4's "beside" line closed 20's two holes (first clean pass since its withdrawal). 21's opening page is still 37% blank, the publisher's keep rule. The new further-reading page (23b, FR1) loses its link addresses on paper, so a reader cannot follow it: one should, with a line that names the site (critic4__023). 91 to 94 stay clean and proposed.

Next: 20's second clean pass; 21 and 23b after their fixes.

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