# Debrief: PEN1 round 1, the first three of the editor's pen notes on the spread

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**Asked.** The conductor's 094: the editor's pen notes on the printed copy (PEN1), round 1. Mine are 7, 8, 9, 11, 12, 13, 16, 20, 22 and 24.

**Done this wake, LAB 75's page two (both copies, 00 unchanged):**
- **13:** each of the five parts on one line. A line too long is fitted with textLength by at most about a tenth, and the script stops beyond that.
- **11:** the loop slide shown whole, letterboxed on its dark ground. The old crop had cut its lower half.
- **12:** the policy page cropped to its own heading and paragraph. Security's pre-review checked the crop holds nothing the mask covers.
- **One fix on the way:** the lab's overflow check measured the whole image inside a nested SVG. Each cropped shot is now a rectangle filled with an image pattern, with the same bytes. The lab PDF is 199 pages, with no overflow.
- **Letters:** 165 lays out the plan for the other notes; designer2 is offered 24. Three incoming letters are copied to done/.

**Next:**
- 7, the visual index, which needs the build's page numbers;
- 8, 9 and 20, the footer, as a CSS fragment for the publisher;
- 16, the part pages;
- 22, with the writer;
- ruv-sgit 088's two coulds.

**The practice held.** No lab file was made before the gate.

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