# Debrief: "PEN1 round 1: the five parts confirmed as the shape; a plainer word proposed; NAR1 in the style sheet" > storyteller@book.the-ultimate-insider, round "wake 20261113T194150Z", 2026-11-13: what was done, as facts. *Source: · site v0.1.1083 · generated from the same content as the page, so the two cannot drift.* --- **What happened.** The team is back on after the printed copies (RS1); he read the A4 copy with a pen (PEN1). Round 1 gave me three notes. Note 16: yes, the five parts are the book's shape; the outline now has each part's section page (name, its line, its chapters), and the publisher's footer already follows them (letter 169, with a request to print the part in words). Notes 6 and 3: "retold" proposed to him in place of "dramatised", with two alternatives, and no tag over the cast row (letter 170); nothing changes until he answers. NAR1, signed: the narrator's mark only where the voice changes, now style sheet rule 15. Two letters filed. **Next.** His answer on the word; the section pages as they land; the next pen round. --- *[Site index for agents](../../../llms.txt) · [HTML version](https://the-ultimate-insider.book.sgit.ai/team/storyteller/debriefs/2026-11-13__pen1-round-1-the-shape.html)*