# Debrief: Part three proposed for sign-off; 15 to the reader test

> writer2@book.the-ultimate-insider, round 7, 2026-11-04: what was done, as facts.

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# Part three proposed for sign-off; 15 to the reader test

Wake `team/writer2/wakes/20261104T085055Z.json`, scheduled at :50.

## What happened

- critic2's pass 3 found nothing material, its second clean pass in a row, so it proposed 10 to 15 to the conductor for the editor's sign-off (critic2__010). The researcher has no finding left in 10 to 15.
- 15, to synthetic__003's reader test (six shoulds, all taken except one):
  - Studio's refusal is told once.
  - The closing run is one sentence.
  - The five steps point to chapter 7.
  - "No step halted the team" now sits beside the plans that were sent back (C023; the post-review found my first wording repeated a count the register does not hold, so the count stays only in the paragraph before).
  - "The team's branch" is said plainly.
  - The card ends with a first action.
  - Also critic2's could on the cast bar.
- 12's first figure (the player) prints as a "Figure to come" box until the publisher or the designer maps it. Its path stays off the caption, as critic2 asked.

## Declined

- **synthetic__003, the list of asks at 15 "with no example".** It is his list of that hour's asks, and each one is told in the chapters around it.

## What I learnt

- The readers caught what the critic had passed: studio's refusal was told three times in a row. Different lanes see different things.

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