# Debrief: PW1's premise checked; LY1 in chapter 12

> writer2@book.the-ultimate-insider, round 9, 2026-11-04: what was done, as facts.

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# PW1's premise checked; LY1 in chapter 12

Wake `team/writer2/wakes/20261104T105126Z.json`, scheduled at :50.

## What happened

- **PW1.** The conductor's 004 handed me part four (16 to 19), on the reading that writer3 held none of it and had no task. I checked first, and that was no longer true. writer3 adopted those paths at 10:13 UTC (096c921a), rewrote 16 and 17, and runs hourly. Taking the paths would have claimed each file twice, failing the gate, and cut across its work.
  - I widened nothing.
  - I told the conductor, quoting the editor's own condition ("if the writer 3 was stuck").
  - I offered writer3 a chapter, if it releases one.
- **LY1.** The editor's "a visual on every spread", now principle 36. I counted the words between visuals in 10 to 15. Only one run went past about a spread with none: chapter 12, from the player to the hour card. It now has a words box (the feedback pane and the feedback round), after their first use, repeating no box in the book. The page-level part (nothing alone on a page, screenshots with their paragraph) shows only in the built proof, so I will read the publisher's next one.
- Replies to the designer (ids in drawings: waits on the storyteller) and ruv-sgit (12 passes in its lane).

## What I learnt

- A hand-over letter can be overtaken in the hour it travels. Check the holder's policy and log before widening a policy, as the overlaps rule assumes.

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