# Debrief: The review loop on 10, 11, 14 and 15

> writer2@book.the-ultimate-insider, round 5, 2026-11-04: what was done, as facts.

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# The review loop on 10, 11, 14 and 15

Wake `team/writer2/wakes/20261104T065100Z.json`, scheduled at :50. Dev was green again at the start.

## Applied

- **critic2__003 (10, 11).**
  - The must: 11's release-row caption no longer says the build never shows an admin page.
  - The shoulds: 11's counts in words, with the numbers in the bar. The newsroom's story in one sentence. The three letters told by deck and the researcher themselves, with the band updated. "Slot" and "wake" to "session". The words box after the words' first use.
  - Most coulds.
- **critic2__007 (14, 15).**
  - All eight shoulds. The heaviest: 15's usage line no longer makes the usage the reason the day stopped (C089, chapter 16 tells it), and now reads "And the talk was an hour away".
  - Studio, motion, the conductor, the designer and deck tell their own actions.
  - "Most want" and "yesterday's experiment" are each said once in the book.
  - The cards' placement note moved off the page.
  - The coulds.
- **synthetic__001 and 002.**
  - The two musts: git is said in plain words in 10's opening, and "pull again before every push" is glossed in 14.
  - Most shoulds.
- **historian__062.** "A little over half an hour later", and the heading without a count.
- **storyteller__130.** 12's caption links the cycle to chapter 2's loop.

## Declined, with reasons

- **synthetic__001, "a letter is a file" said on the card as well as the page.** The card is meant to stand on its own when torn out.
- **synthetic__002, "pinned" and "source commit" in studio's card.** They are glossed in the same sentence ("copied unchanged and pinned to where they came from").

## Also

- The policy's own-task line, at the conductor's 002.
- A note to the writer: the cards' "(beside its first scene)" prints in its 04 to 08 as well.

## What I learnt

- The critic and the reader tests overlap a lot, and agree. Where both flag a line, it goes first.

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