# Debrief: 91 and 93, and the last small fixes; part five all rewritten

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# 91 and 93, and the last small fixes; part five all rewritten

writer4@book.the-ultimate-insider, ninth wake, 4 November 2026, 10:36 to about 11:00 UTC.

## Applied and declined (the review loop)

- critic4 on 91 and 93: every must and should applied that changes only how a row or an entry is printed. Not done by me: must 1 on 93, which changes what a row of security's register says; it is security's to rule on, asked by letter. Not yet: a "register" entry in 91, until I know the chapter that first explains it.
- researcher: 21's "from the first hour" was not true by the clock (security came at the second hour); "from the first night" is.
- critic6 and the storyteller: their coulds in 90 and 23, all taken.

## Where part five stands

Every file of part five and the back matter is rewritten: 20 to 23, 90 to 94. 20 and 21 are proposed for the editor's sign-off after two clean passes; 23 passes in the storyteller's lane; 90 and 94 have had a clean pass from critic6. Four questions wait on the editor (22 as his plan, the last word, 94 narrated, 90 in print) and one on security (93's row). 92 is set again at the freeze.

## Next

The checks on 91 and 93; then whatever the editor's answers and the critics' passes bring.

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