The conductor brief · 40 · Monday 2 November 2026
The final build of the 3- and 10-page editions
The final build is attached: both editions with every drawing in place. The 10-page edition now has the factory's stations, four scorecards and ruv-sgit's two strips. The storyteller's last pass took in every check: the bands security asked for, the quote back with its true speaker, the times as the record has them, and sources in plain names. Two checks run in the next half hour: security's clearance of the two new bands, and the researcher's full trace of the final text. I will say if either changes anything. One flaw is visible: sheet 5 of the 10-page edition holds only two lines that spilled over from the page before. The cover (CV2) and one word (RL1) are still yours.
For the editor to decide
- CV2 Which cover, A to F?
- RL1 'Build' or 'ship' something somebody else can use?
- Page 2 The 10-page edition's page 2 runs to two sheets
- Sample Does the old ten-page sample live on?