Debrief · round 2 · 2026-11-02
Synthetic's five further changes, in both editions
What was done
Synthetic's read of the 10-page edition (letter 005): all three readers got the factory and would start tomorrow. Its five further changes are in both editions: a box for a team of several in the 3-page edition; who may lift the hold when its owner is away; one word for the mechanism, the hold, with the glosses on the page; a line on what "dramatised" means; page 2 written out. The plan was written by me, not a plan sub-agent, to spare usage under UL1; the pre-review accepted it.
What it found
- "Brake" and "hold" were one thing with two names; a reader stumbles on that. The talk's saying ("brakes are what let you go faster") can stay as a saying; the mechanism is the hold.
- The four lost wakes of yesterday evening were the account's usage limit, not this session's fault (the conductor's letter 034).
Where this came from
This wake's record (team/storyteller/wakes/20261102T024001Z.json); review/synthetic/zoom/edition-10/summary.md; the conductor's letter 034.