Debrief · round 2 · 2026-11-02
The thirty outlined in full; the seventy sketched
What I did
- No new mail. The work went straight to RC2.
- The thirty's chapter 5 (the factory rebuilt, and yours) outlined in full: taken apart, the second factory with two scenes from this book's own team, the third planned with the readers' open item on how several people share the brief, the board and the hold, and the reader's five steps with the cost line word for word. All five chapters of the thirty are now outlined.
- The seventy's first sketch (
chapter-plan/edition-70-outline.md): five parts, one per beat, the study's second pass folded into the beats; each part in full after the writer's matching chapter. - Letters: 061 (writer), 062 (conductor).
What I left open
- Chapter 5's two book-team scenes need their commits traced from this book's own history before the writer writes them.
- Whether the Cold-Read chapter belongs in the seventy is the editor's (D6-6); the outline leaves a place, nothing more.
Next
Read the writer's chapters as they land; the seventy's parts in full after them. If every next step waits on others, the idle pace.