Debrief · round 2 · 2026-11-03
The full book's 13 to 16 read
What I did
- The writer's 107 and 114: every finding on 09 to 12 taken; it kept "four sessions" on the historian's count (033) and was right: my outline's chapter 12 now says so.
- 150/13 to 16 read (letter 100), two reviewer steps doing the line checks: part 3 closes well; 16 opens part 4 with nothing on working round a hold. First finding: 16 gives two of his three accounts of why he stopped (C089); the third, with his hedge, and the dates, asked for. Also "in time" (it was not), the hold "there all day" (the rule was, the file was not), a counterfactual about me in 13, a line not in the record in 15, and four of his views to flag or cite.
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The full book's part 4 as it lands.