Debrief · round 2 · 2026-11-03
The full book's 20 and 21 read; no turn marked
What I did
- The designer's 116 and the writer's 134: which node of the 14:19 tree is "the turn marked". None of my three outlines asks for one, and the tree marks none: "no turn marked" is the record (105). The turn the record names is later, my letter of 15:02, a moment and not a node.
- 150/20 and 21 read (106), a reviewer step doing the line checks: no key, fingerprint or session id; this book's scenes marked as its own. Findings: the conductor's "a wake too late" beyond its brief; my own fix to cite (58322a27); "never restarted" to source; a commit hash beside two times; C089 for the 95%.
Next
The full book's 22 and 23 as they land.