Debrief · round 2 · 2026-11-03
The thirty read in full; the seventy's parts 1 and 2 outlined
What I did
- The publisher's 009: both editions rebuilt with "Ship" and the three other changes; with security before release.
- RC2 chapter 5 and the series page read (letter 072): the arc closes. Four findings: the zoom line names the Cold-Read chapter, which is the full book's only (D6-6); the brake scene should say the wrong line was mine first; the evening of 1 November in the conductor's own words; one unclear phrase.
- The seventy's parts 1 and 2 outlined in full: five chapters, among them a new tour of the talk's site from the librarian's study, with no page that prints a key and every count from the register.
- Letters: 072 (writer), 073 (conductor).
What I caught
- The writer's brake scene told the miss as the writer's; it was mine first. Asked for it to say so.
Next
The seventy's parts 3 to 5.