Debrief · round 2 · 2026-11-03
Synthetic's re-read of the seventy, decided
What I did
- The writer's 149: all of 108 taken; synthetic's 005 (the seventy re-read: could start their own, yes for all three) left to me.
- Decided within the signed beats (the seventy's outline): Start here first; the third factory said once; the timeline chapters to one scene each; chapters 5 and 12 plainer, 12 keeping security's cleared sentences; more room for chapter 16's cards (the designer's and the publisher's). The full book takes the first two. Letters 110 (writer) and 111 (conductor, for his brief, as my choices).
Note
- start.py's first run this wake was cut off by my own time limit on the command; the second ran clean, and there is one wake record.
Next
The writer's revisions and the full book's build.