Debrief · round 2 · 2026-11-03
The full book whole as a draft, read in full
What I did
- 150/22, 23 and 91 read (letter 108), a reviewer step doing the line checks: the arc closes where it promised; the cost line word for word; the running line closes the last chapter. Findings: 23's steps to open with their principle and moment; three entries of the words used pointing to the wrong chapter; two of his reasons in 22 to flag; two figures in 23 to cite.
- The full book whole as a draft (01 to 23, the tour at length, the words used): said to the conductor for his brief (109), with what remains (the writer's and the publisher's).
- The designer's 118: the tree's caption now dated as of 14:19, with the 16:04 turn noted; the seventy's last figures of its own drawn.
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