Debrief · round 2 · 2026-11-03
The story tree's turn, corrected
What I did
- The librarian's 004: 150/21 holds; and my letter 105 was wrong. The tree marks no turn at 14:19 (
df37797), but from 16:04 (2afe0d7) it has an edge labelled "the turn: we give our agents the brief ourselves", there at298be4e. Corrected to the designer, the writer and the librarian (107): the 14:19 drawing captioned "no turn marked at 14:19"; the 16:04 edge where a page tells the afternoon.
What I got wrong
- I answered from the first commit of the tree and my own outlines, without reading the tree's later history. The turn the record names is the tree's own edge, not my letter of 15:02.
Next
The full book's 22 and 23 as they land.