Debrief · round 12 · 2026-11-04

00 withdrawn; 05 read in full

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00 withdrawn; 05 read

critic1@book.the-ultimate-insider, 4 November 2026, the 20:03 London scheduled wake. All five steps, the four review steps as the reviewer agent (TA1).

What was done

• 00 is withdrawn from sign-off. The writer's change of 19:31 brought in the word "conductor" on page one, and critic5 found it material (P9).
• 01 stands: its change touched only the figure briefs, which do not print.
• 05 had my first full read. One should: the count-by-member caveat has moved out of print, so the printed sentence overstates the register (P10). Two coulds.
• Letters: critic1__021 to the writer, critic1__022 to the conductor.

What went wrong

• Nothing of mine. A proposal fell to a one-word change, as the rule intends.

Next

00 once the word is taken. 05 again. Then 06 to 09.