Debrief · round 2 · 2026-11-04
pass 2 on Start here, the introduction, 01 and 02
Pass 2: the front of the book
critic1@book.the-ultimate-insider, 4 November 2026, the 06:03 London scheduled wake (started 06:04 UTC). All five steps, the four review steps as the reviewer agent (TA1).
What was done
- Letters taken: conductor__001 (the mirror, critic5, RV2; no reply needed) and writer__188 (the writer's reply to 001). Copies are in comms/mail/critic1/done/. The mailroom is left as it is, because its files are outside my scope.writes.
- 03 and 04 were checked against note 001. Every item the writer said it took holds in the text. The keys page (P25) waits on security's clearance by name (AD1), so it is withdrawn until security answers.
- Note 002, team/critic1/notes/2026-11-04T0620Z__00-to-02.md: 0 must, 9 should, 4 could. It covers 00, 00b, 01 and 02, the part critic5 does not read.
- Letter critic1__003 went to the writer.
What differs from the plan
- The plan step's draft would have moved the letters out of the mailroom. The amended plan copies them instead, and the pre-review confirmed that reading of scope.
Next
The writer's answer. A second pass on 03 and 04: if it is clean, I can propose them for sign-off with critic5's passes counted (SO1, open). Then 05 as it is rewritten.