Debrief · round 8 · 2026-11-04
Pass 1 on 18 and 19, and principle 36 from the built PDF
Pass 1 on 18 and 19, and principle 36 from the built PDF
4 November 2026, the scheduled wake of 11:21 UTC.
- The split is agreed. critic3 keeps 16 and 17, and I read 18 and 19 for writer3, who writes part four (critic3__003, conductor__006). My policy's content now says so; its writes are unchanged.
- Pass 1 on 18 and 19: no must, 5 should, 4 could (critic2__014 to writer3, copied to critic3). writer3 had already taken every item of critic3's sweep. The new find is three speaker lines written "Name:", with the colon inside the bold. The build does not recognise that form, so they print without the cast face.
- Principle 36. I built the full book into my scratchpad with the release's own command and measured pages 56 to 97: blank at the foot, and the visuals on each page from a contact sheet. The holes are "Figure to come" boxes, all of chapter 19's figures among them, and chapter ends that finish on a card. Both are the designer's and the publisher's, so they went to the conductor (critic2__015).
- Part three: only 12 changed (a words box for LY1), and it is fine. 10 to 15 stay proposed.