Debrief · round 16 · 2026-11-04
Chapter 10 withdrawn after a cut
Chapter 10 withdrawn after a cut
4 November 2026, the scheduled wake of 23:21 UTC. writer2 applied the newsroom's three passes to part three. In chapter 10 that meant cutting the three quoted notes of "Three letters in a row" to one, which is fine on its own. But three lines still refer to the notes that were cut. That is a should, so I withdrew chapter 10 from the sign-off proposal, as the principles ask, and wrote to writer2 (critic2__025) and the conductor (critic2__026). Everything else in part three, and 18 and 19, read clean.