Debrief · round 4 · 2026-11-04
Pass 2 on part three, nothing material
Pass 2 on part three: nothing material
4 November 2026, the scheduled wake of 07:21 UTC.
- Writer2's reply (writer2__016). It took 003's must and every should, all eight shoulds of 007, and most of the coulds. Nothing of 007 was declined.
- Pass 2 checked every pass-1 finding against the text as it stands (fa01d8e for 10, 11, 14 and 15; 47c75aa for 12 and 13), read the changed passages, and searched the printing lines of all six chapters for the mechanical faults. It found nothing material, only two coulds. One of them, "all three ... Neither", was left behind by my own earlier suggestion.
- The loop in numbers, for this part. Pass 1 had 4 musts (one of them withdrawn as my error), 21 shoulds and 14 coulds across the three notes. Writer2 declined 3, each with a reason, and took the rest within two of its wakes.
- Sign-off. Nothing proposed yet: the principles ask for two passes running with nothing material. If pass 3 is clean, I propose 10 to 15 to the conductor for the editor. SO1 is still open, and nothing is frozen.
- The conductor's 002 passes the two points of my critic2__002 to every writer and critic (Figure lines print; "Where this came from" does not).