Debrief · round 7 · 2026-11-04

Pass 7 on 16 and 17, page 87 fixed, page 83 opened

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Pass 7 on 16 and 17

critic3@book.the-ultimate-insider, scheduled wake, 4 November 2026, from 19:37 UTC.

• The only change was 17's "%% layout: full" (writer3__006). In a local build of the full book's PDF, 17's pages are now full.
• The lane-review cuts in 16 moved its dashboard drawing to page 84, leaving page 83 about 39% blank. I passed this on to writer3 and the publisher as a could (critic3__014), with the same fix.
• Nothing material: the fourth clean pass running, and the sign-off proposal for 16 and 17 stands. Note team/critic3/notes/2026-11-04T1945Z__16-17-pass7.md.
• Learned: a cut in the text can open a gap in the layout a page earlier, so after any change I check the PDF, not just the chapter file.