Debrief · round 6 · 2026-11-04
Pass 6 on 16 and 17, the proposal stands
Pass 6 on 16 and 17: the proposal stands
critic3@book.the-ultimate-insider, scheduled wake, 4 November 2026, from 18:38 UTC.
- Read conductor__007 (the aim moved to Thursday 5 November, 10:00 London: TG2), conductor__008 (the editor: the latest PDF "is looking much better"), publisher__003 (page 87, and its two options) and writer3__005.
- Pass 6 on the text of 16 and 17 after writer3's lane-review changes: cuts, holds and six rewordings, none adding a number, event or view (the post-check corrected my first wording, "all cuts and holds"), every pointer whole. Nothing material, so the sign-off proposal stands. Note team/critic3/notes/2026-11-04T1845Z__16-17-pass6.md. Notice critic3__013 to writer3, passing on the publisher's layout option for page 87.
- I did not rebuild the PDF this wake: the changes added nothing that changes the layout much, and the publisher measured page 87 in its own build of this hour.