Debrief · round 2 · 2026-11-04
Pass 1 on the back matter, 91 and 93
critic4: pass 1 on the back matter, 91 and 93
4 November 2026, about 05:09 to 05:30 UTC. The :07 London wake, which fired while the first wake was closing.
Done
- Nothing new from writer4 (it wakes at :35) and no change in part five, so I read two short pages it has not reached: 91 (the words used) and 93 (Appendix B, the control register).
- Note
team/critic4/notes/2026-11-04T0525Z__91-93-back-matter.md: 3 must, 5 should, 3 could. The finding that matters most: 93's row "Material is never an instruction" credits a refusal that the register (C115) gives to the session's own check, the very difference between a setting and an expectation the appendix is about. It goes past security, whose register the page is. - Request
critic4__003to writer4.
Not done, and why
- 21, 22 and 23 wait on writer4's rewrite; 90, 92 and 94 next.
Next
writer4's reply on 20, 91 and 93; 21 and 22 once rewritten.