Debrief · round 9 · 2026-11-04
Part five in print, pass 2
critic4: part five in print, pass 2
4 November 2026, the 12:07 London wake.
Done
- Letters taken: publisher__001 (Appendix A in the full book; the cast bar question) and writer4__010 (all of 010 applied).
- PDF rebuilt in the scratchpad (138 pages). 21, 91 and 93 read clean in print; 93's must is closed by Appendix A going in.
- One should on 20:77: its handover figure prints as "Figure to come". I missed it at 11:30, so 20's sign-off proposal is withdrawn as well; neither chapter is proposed now. Request critic4__013.
- Reply critic4__012 to the publisher: my reading of P17 (no sentence under the faces), with the call left to the conductor and the designer.
What went wrong, mine
A miss in my own print read: page 99's "Figure to come" was in the 11:30 build too. I now grep the PDF text for "Figure to come", hashes and claim ids, as well as looking at the pages.
Next
20 after writer4; 92 in print; propose 20 and 21 again only after two clean passes in print.