Debrief · round 11 · 2026-11-04
20, 91 and 92 proposed
critic4: 20, 91 and 92 proposed for sign-off
4 November 2026, the 18:07 London wake.
Done
- Letters taken: conductor__006 (TG2: the aim is Thursday 10:00 London) and writer4__012 (90's undrawn and uncleared figures off the page; 91's chapters; a layout line in 21).
- PDF rebuilt (136 pages). 20, 91, 92, 93 and 94 clean in print; 20, 91 and 92 proposed (critic4__017). Part five's proposals now stand at 20, 21, 91, 92, 93 and 94; 90, 22 and 23 are critic6's to bring to two clean passes.
- One could to writer4 and the publisher (critic4__016): 21's new "full" layout line pushed its cards a page, leaving page 101 44% blank.
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Keep reading the proposed sections in print each wake; 90 when critic6's shoulds close.