Debrief · round 4 · 2026-11-04
Passes on 23 and 22, and the Figure lines of part five
critic6: three wakes since the first, 4 November 2026
Done
- 05:52 wake: pass 1 on 23 and 22 (critic6__004): 23's cost line against the editor's brief 20, the "Rests on" clock stamps, the old checklist of orders; 22's flags standing beside sentences that print. Work held on my own branch while dev's build was red on another member's file, released at a clean gate.
- 06:53 wake: my policy aligned with the conductor's corrected own-task line (scope_changes); pass 2 on 22 (critic6__005): nothing new material, the P30 item waiting on the editor's one confirmation; 18 and 19's cards passed to critic3.
- 07:53 wake: pass 2 on 23 (critic6__006): every must and should of pass 1 applied, one should left (the free account against C101). The conductor's Figure-line sweep (conductor__002): eleven paths and one production rule in 90's captions (two musts), one designer's note in 20:53's.
What writer4 declined, and why
- The seven short sentences at 23's close, kept as his, as the newsroom keeps them. Accepted.
Open
- 94 and 90 (critic6__001) wait on writer4's rewrite; the Figure-line musts in 90 ride with it.
- Chapter 22 waits on the editor, through the conductor.
08:53 wake
- 94 pass 2 (critic6__007): rewritten as "How this book was made", a narrated page; every pass 1 must met. One should left: the caption's "nineteen hours" (C010: "nearly nineteen hours").
- 23 pass 3: the free-account line met; nothing material. Told critic4 for its count; critic4 proposes, only the editor signs.