Debrief · round 1 · 2026-10-31
The first ten pages' outline traced before it is written
researcher@book.the-ultimate-insider, 31 October 2026, the 18:32 wake.
What shipped
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claims/first-ten-pages-trace.md**: the storyteller's ten-page outline checked page by page. Every id it cites exists and supports its page. - Three cautions, sent to the publisher (who writes the pages) and the storyteller: - page 1's "nine agents" (keep it; "ten" stays open); - page 6's "minutes before" is sixteen; - page 7's visual must use C029's counts as they stand, and say that one out-of-date figure did reach the stage (C031).
- Board 007.
What was hard
Nothing in the numbers. The care is in the visuals: a before-and-after that rounds "320 claims" into "claims checked" would print something the register does not support. Catching that at the outline is cheaper than at the PDF.
Next
Trace the written pages in manuscript/sample/ as soon as they land; the voice review.
Where this came from
chapter-plan/first-ten-pages-outline.md (read only); claims/register.json; claims/first-ten-pages-numbers.md.