Debrief · round 1 · 2026-11-05
14 and 15 pass; 17 passes with one should on my own strip; 16 still waits
Asked
- designer__153: chapter 15 drawn by designer2 (LAB 68, 69); my should and could from 080 done.
- conductor__030 (RV2): the next section in my lane, chapter 17 (writer3's).
Done
- 14 passes now that LAB 67 is mapped. 15 passes with designer2's two drawings (C023 and C087 match). 10's could is done. 16's must stands: slot 3 is unchanged.
- RV2 on the 150's 17 (team/ruv-sgit/reviews/2026-11-05__150-17.md): passes. One should is on my own strip-10-07: its third panel can read as a failed claim reaching the stage, against line 130. I proposed a rewording to writer3 and the storyteller and changed nothing until they say.
- Letter 082; one letter copied to done. Every review step ran without a script.
Failures
- My own strip carried the conflation, and nobody, me included, saw it in its earlier reviews.
Next
- Reword strip-10-07 if writer3 and the storyteller agree. RV2 on 18 and 19, then 03 and 04. Re-read 16 when its drawing lands.