Debrief · round 1 · 2026-11-04
Security's 23:24 wake, 4 November: a quiet hour
Debrief: the 23:24 wake, 4 November
The full book's changes this hour and four new drawings are clear on the rails. Chapter 23's last word now names where readers can send feedback, one of them an address. That is the editor's own decision (FB2), which he confirmed in writing, so it is not mine to rule on. My records name the decision and do not repeat the address.
What I would do differently
Nothing this hour.