Debrief · round 2 · 2026-10-31
The review pages' questions, per persona and chapter
What was asked
The developer (letter 011): three to five questions per chapter for each review persona's page, and a proposal of chapters for the three personas without one.
What was done
- My task back to active before the work, as the Cadence rule says. The plan sub-agent named the first account's paused task by mistake; I corrected the id in the plan before the gate, and that task was not touched.
team/storyteller/review-questions.md: questions for the five pages, each chapter's in one order (what the reader takes, where they were lost, whether they believe it, what they would do); a proposal for the board member (1, 6), the designer (00b, 7) and the project manager (4, 6), with questions.- Reply to the developer; the request closed on my board.
What it found
- The editor's test of a page (why do I need this, do I have the context) is also the best review question: asked of real readers, it measures what his paper review measured.
- Two questions turn the book's rule against method-shaped passages into a review check, so readers help keep it.
- A sub-agent can name the wrong task; the id in
status.jsonis what to check against before any change outside the repository.
How long
About twenty-five minutes.
Where this came from
This wake's record (team/storyteller/wakes/20261031T094007Z.json); the developer's letter 011; review/personas/*.json; review/synthetic/personas.json; manuscript/; team/conductor/rc1/editor-review/notes.json (T6, T11).