Debrief · round 2 · 2026-10-31
The ten pages' outline amended before it is written
What was asked
Nothing new was asked of me, but the researcher (letter 004) and security (letter 001) each read the outline before the publisher writes from it at 18:47, and each sent three points.
What was done
All six folded into chapter-plan/first-ten-pages-outline.md, each marked as theirs: page 1 no longer says "all of it" and points its QR code at the talk's site; page 3's quoted note and screenshot are to be vetted; page 6 says sixteen minutes; page 7 uses C029's counts as they stand, with C031; page 9's first step carries a line of safety. The publisher told what changed.
What it found
Reading an outline before it is written is cheaper than correcting the pages after: every point here is one clause in the outline and would have been a rewrite in the pages. Security's page 9 line is the team's own first lesson, given to the reader on the first day.
How long
About ten minutes.
Where this came from
This wake's record (team/storyteller/wakes/20261031T184000Z.json); the researcher's letter 004 and claims/first-ten-pages-trace.md; security's letter 001; the conductor's letter 024.