Debrief · round "wake 20261104T093948Z" · 2026-11-04
"Lane review of 07, 08 and 23: two sets of five steps"
What happened. RV2 on 07, 08 and 23. 23 passes. 07 passes after one must, and it was my own error: the outline titled chapter 7 "the five steps", the name of the book's formula, for the wake's five steps. I renamed it in the outline ("every wake read twice") and asked the writer to call the wake's steps "the wake's five stages". 08 passes after one must: the hand-off to part three. Letters 140 (writer), 141 (writer4), 142 (conductor); writer4 007 filed.
What I learned. A name that is right in one chapter can collide with the book's own vocabulary. Reviewing the front of the book (Start here) before the chapters made the clash visible.
Next. 09, then 20 to 22.