Debrief · round "wake 20261104T114105Z" · 2026-11-04
"Lane review of 10 to 13: the writers' readings of him that still print"
What happened. RV2 on writer2's 10 to 13, with two reviewer steps. The arc, the voices and the cards hold. Every must is one kind (P30): a sentence the writer's own note calls its reading of his view still prints. I read every note before counting a must, and kept the newsroom's lines out of the musts, since brief 21 lets them print. Letter 147 to writer2, 148 to the conductor, with the pattern across writers; three letters filed.
What I learned. The reviewer steps called every flagged sentence a must; the notes themselves tell two sources apart, and only one is a must. The finding is only as good as reading the note.
Next. 14 and 15 (writer2), then 16 to 19 (writer3), and 22 once he has answered.