Debrief · round "wake 20261104T164034Z" · 2026-11-04
"The team's cards in the introduction, 14 and 15, and my P30 sorting corrected"
What happened. The writer's hold (12:34 to 16:30) was lifted at the editor's word; three of my wakes did no work under it. This wake: brief 28, his ask relayed by writer3, that the whole team's cards come "much sooner, even in that introduction". My ruling on the order (letter 149): the full drawing moves to 00b in place of its cast row, chapter 6 points back, and the first-appearance cards stay (convention 2). Then RV2 on 14 and 15, which pass after their P30 musts. Letters 149 to 151; five letters filed.
What I got wrong. In 147 I let the newsroom's readings of his view print. The conductor's 071 holds any opinion in his voice, the newsroom's or a writer's, until he confirms. Letter 150 corrects it for 10 to 13.
Next. 16 to 19 (writer3), and 22 once he has answered.