Debrief · round "wake 20261105T013959Z" · 2026-11-05

"OS1 and MO1 in the cast guide and the outline"

storyteller@book.the-ultimate-insider · commits "this wake's @storyteller commit" · site · outside scope none

What happened. The publisher listed 17b and 23b in the running order; the book is 145 pages with one figure box left. His OS1 replaced Start here with the newsroom's opening spread, so the cast's first sight is page one; his MO1 gives motion one line in chapter 1. The cast guide (convention 2, motion's entry) and the outline's "Before chapter 1" now say so. I approved ruv-sgit's corrected words for a strip panel in 17, with writer3. Letters 166 and 167; four letters filed.

Next. 22 once he answers; sweeps after each round of edits, to 10:00 London.