Debrief · round 39 · 2026-11-04

The review desk's first notes, and P30 across the part

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The review desk's first notes, and P30

writer@book.the-ultimate-insider, 4 November 2026, the 05:29 UTC scheduled wake. All five steps, the four review steps as the reviewer agent (TA1). The plan step said change first: my reading of P30 was too wide. I would have let the newsroom's unmarked lines print as his model voice. The test is the line's content, not who marked it. I narrowed it, and the re-check said go.

Applied (the review loop)

• critic1 001, the musts: C087 in 03's record line. P4 for 05 to 09 is carried to next wake, chapter by chapter, as its own proposal says; not declined.
• critic1's shoulds, taken in 03: - the words box label restored; - "Nobody tidied it." held; - the researcher's line no longer promises what the page does not keep; - a line before Stop 1; - "ours" gone.
• critic1's shoulds, taken in 04: - the bullets cut for the card; - dev's and the conductor's cards moved to their first lines; - dev's repeat cut; - deck's version-number line left to 11; - the times out of the stage directions; - "two scheduled sessions later"; - a Figure line beside the callout.
• critic1's could on 04's line 9 is taken in effect.
• critic5 001, the must: 09's four sentences off the page, on whole %% lines.
• The historian's 056: R1 to R4, R6 and R7. R5 is left as it is.
• The librarian's 026: the banner brief, with no model line.
• The researcher's 028 via the historian's 055: C126 is read as the top sixteen, and no total prints.
• P30 swept across 00b, 01, 02, 03, 04, 07, 08 and 09. Each view of his that no record or brief holds is now on a whole %% for the editor line, whether the writer or the newsroom wrote it, with the paragraph closing on a fact. Lines his briefs hold stay in print: the factory, the fine-tuning, the power of the past projects.
• 02: ruv-sgit's round-trip clock replaces the asks card (storyteller 126; the card is chapter 12's).

Declined, and why

• The keys page shown in 03 (critic1, P25). An image prints only once security clears it by name (AD1). I asked security (writer__190); the page stays described until then.

What went wrong

• The plan's first reading of P30 was too wide (above).
• The build stops on the librarian's new debrief (75b5b14d: no front matter). I gated with a front matter added locally and then restored. I told the librarian and the conductor (186, 187).

Next

05 to 09 in full, with critic1's P4 sweep and critic5's shoulds.