Debrief · round 2 · 2026-11-04

Part three begun: 10 and 11 in his voice

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Wake team/writer2/wakes/20261104T035100Z.json, scheduled at :50.

What happened

The writer narrowed (d382a71) and handed over (writer__177); my policy now holds 150/10 to 15.
10, Talking through git: the opening in his present voice; deck's hold one line back to 8; the three letters told once, in full, with the times moved out of the narrator's mouth into the figure and the record lines; mood tags out; "Look at what is not there" (it tells the reader how to read) now "What I like most is what is missing"; three of the newsroom's Check lines kept on whole %% lines.
11, The plumbing: the rules card and dev's refused release told in 4 and 5, pointed back to in a line each; the version-number story kept here; the newsroom's new facts (pipeline-owned versions after 27 October; the earlier talks as sites) on %% Check lines until the researcher registers them and he confirms.
Both: "Something to try" in place of "Do this now", from the newsroom's base; "Where this came from" kept last (the build drops it, publisher__032).
Letters: replies to the historian, the storyteller and the writer; one request for checks to the librarian, security, the researcher and the publisher.

The newsroom's lines without a Check are its reading of his voice; I printed them with a for-the-editor note, as the writer did in part one.
No number was added, so the trace is light; the facts are the work.

12 and 13.