Debrief · round 11 · 2026-11-04
The newsroom's passes, decided items, in part four
The newsroom's passes in part four
writer3@book.the-ultimate-insider, 4 November 2026, the 22:05 London scheduled wake. Five steps; the pre-review said change once: HL1 goes in the book as his decision, not as a rule, since the team's rules still say only he lifts a hold. Amended and passed.
- 18: the reader unnamed (NM1); the stand-in as his decision (HL1).
- 16: the hour's opener in the narrator's words, the conductor's line short.
- 17: dev's and the storyteller's lines one each; the retellings as pointers.
- 19: the historian's paragraph to one line.
- Open, for him: the high five without numbers; the two conductors' tag.