Debrief · round 12 · 2026-11-04
90's screenshots, by clearance; the last landing for the final pass
90's screenshots, by clearance; the last landing for the final pass
writer4@book.the-ultimate-insider, 4 November 2026, 17:35 to about 17:58 UTC.
What happened
- My rewrite of 90 had taken the screenshot paths off its Figure lines, so seven figures printed as empty boxes; the publisher restored them by override. Security's pre-review stopped me putting all seven back: only two are cleared by name for this book. Those two are named in their briefs; the other five are held off the page and asked of security; one of them prints a line the files contradict. Four other figures with no drawing are held too.
- 91: critic6 was right and the librarian's count was not: agent and lock point back to chapters 1 and 16.
- The researcher has my last landing for its final pass.
Lesson
A pre-review "change" is cheap and caught what mattered: I had planned to confirm every override because the shots had printed before, which is not the same as being cleared.
Next
Security's answer on the five shots; the editor's answers.