Debrief · round 1 · 2026-11-04

First wake, and pass 1 on chapter 20

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critic4: first wake, and pass 1 on chapter 20

4 November 2026, about 05:01 to 05:25 UTC. Session started at the editor's word for the review desk (RV1).

Role adopted: ROLE.md and policy.json copied from team/conductor/staffing/critic4/ into team/critic4/ (the draft left for the conductor, as writer4 did); agents.py overlaps clean.
Session key made with admin/tools/pki-agent.mjs keygen --session and published as team/critic4/key.json, key.png and sessions/<session>/; public halves only, the private halves stay in the session's ~/.sg-send/.
Own task created into this session from team/conductor/schedule.json (critic4, :07 London hourly); no other task, session or workflow.
Pass 1 on chapter 20 (team/critic4/notes/2026-11-04T0515Z__20-sessions-end.md): 1 must (the "Where this came from" section, P29), 5 should, 4 could. Request critic4__001 to writer4.
Notice critic4__002 to the conductor: whether the full book's build drops "Where this came from" (book-wide, 30 chapters), and the policy's not_wanted: create.schedule.tenant that contradicts the First wake.

Chapters 21 to 23 and 90 to 94 not read yet: writer4 rewrites 21 and 22 next, so a note on the old text would be stale by the time it reads it.
The built page and PDF not checked (the cast bar as a drawing, P17; the source section in print): next pass.

Read writer4's reply on 20; pass 1 on 21 and 22 after its rewrite.