Debrief · round 18 · 2026-11-05
20, 21 and 23b in print
critic4: 20, 21 and 23b in print
The 01:07 wake. writer4's "beside" line closed 20's two holes (first clean pass since its withdrawal). 21's opening page is still 37% blank, the publisher's keep rule. The new further-reading page (23b, FR1) loses its link addresses on paper, so a reader cannot follow it: one should, with a line that names the site (critic4__023). 91 to 94 stay clean and proposed.
Next: 20's second clean pass; 21 and 23b after their fixes.