Debrief · round 0 · 2026-11-13
PEN1 round 1, the first three of the editor's pen notes on the spread
Asked. The conductor's 094: the editor's pen notes on the printed copy (PEN1), round 1. Mine are 7, 8, 9, 11, 12, 13, 16, 20, 22 and 24.
Done this wake, LAB 75's page two (both copies, 00 unchanged):
- 13: each of the five parts on one line. A line too long is fitted with textLength by at most about a tenth, and the script stops beyond that.
- 11: the loop slide shown whole, letterboxed on its dark ground. The old crop had cut its lower half.
- 12: the policy page cropped to its own heading and paragraph. Security's pre-review checked the crop holds nothing the mask covers.
- One fix on the way: the lab's overflow check measured the whole image inside a nested SVG. Each cropped shot is now a rectangle filled with an image pattern, with the same bytes. The lab PDF is 199 pages, with no overflow.
- Letters: 165 lays out the plan for the other notes; designer2 is offered 24. Three incoming letters are copied to done/.
Next:
- 7, the visual index, which needs the build's page numbers;
- 8, 9 and 20, the footer, as a CSS fragment for the publisher;
- 16, the part pages;
- 22, with the writer;
- ruv-sgit 088's two coulds.
The practice held. No lab file was made before the gate.