Debrief · round "wake 20261113T194150Z" · 2026-11-13

"PEN1 round 1: the five parts confirmed as the shape; a plainer word proposed; NAR1 in the style sheet"

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What happened. The team is back on after the printed copies (RS1); he read the A4 copy with a pen (PEN1). Round 1 gave me three notes. Note 16: yes, the five parts are the book's shape; the outline now has each part's section page (name, its line, its chapters), and the publisher's footer already follows them (letter 169, with a request to print the part in words). Notes 6 and 3: "retold" proposed to him in place of "dramatised", with two alternatives, and no tag over the cast row (letter 170); nothing changes until he answers. NAR1, signed: the narrator's mark only where the voice changes, now style sheet rule 15. Two letters filed.

Next. His answer on the word; the section pages as they land; the next pen round.