Debrief · round 7 · 2026-11-04

Part three proposed for sign-off; 15 to the reader test

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What happened

critic2's pass 3 found nothing material, its second clean pass in a row, so it proposed 10 to 15 to the conductor for the editor's sign-off (critic2__010). The researcher has no finding left in 10 to 15.
15, to synthetic__003's reader test (six shoulds, all taken except one): - Studio's refusal is told once. - The closing run is one sentence. - The five steps point to chapter 7. - "No step halted the team" now sits beside the plans that were sent back (C023; the post-review found my first wording repeated a count the register does not hold, so the count stays only in the paragraph before). - "The team's branch" is said plainly. - The card ends with a first action. - Also critic2's could on the cast bar.
12's first figure (the player) prints as a "Figure to come" box until the publisher or the designer maps it. Its path stays off the caption, as critic2 asked.

synthetic__003, the list of asks at 15 "with no example". It is his list of that hour's asks, and each one is told in the chapters around it.

The readers caught what the critic had passed: studio's refusal was told three times in a row. Different lanes see different things.